In times of gloom
Or in times of joy
Time doesn’t pause
Time isn’t coy
Reality strikes
Time and again
Life has and will
Continue to bargain
Not for survival
Not for salvation
He who’s Solomon
Will perform the action
May the trouble
Despite delight
Light up our souls
To wake and fight
He shall fail
But then will win
He who listens to
His voice within
One day of success
One day of fame
Till then what matters
Is to play the game
Live it & continue to live…
September 25, 2007 at 8:19 am
Yeah, correctly said, time will not pause for anyone n anything. He who fights like solomon will only win. Someone has rightly said – he who fights has a chance to win but if he does not stand up and fight, has no chance to win.
May GOD bless u.
September 25, 2007 at 8:42 am
Rajesh,
Yes Pa, absolutely right realization. A true understanding defined in proper words by you.
Cheers!
September 26, 2007 at 3:58 am
Life’s a river flowing and it doesn’t stop. Either go with the flow or drown, right? Good one. Thanks for visiting my blog.
September 26, 2007 at 4:54 am
Very right, tuttysan… Absolutely right!
Many Thanks for visiting my blog too and for adding a link in yours as well.
Stay good as gold!
September 27, 2007 at 3:22 pm
Life is not given to be too short or too long… its upon what u do with the Time that Life provides u with…
Like you say… for that one day on name and fame is why we all play the game…
September 29, 2007 at 6:24 am
So true…We only have as long(or as short)as our life, might as well put it to good use.
September 29, 2007 at 8:05 am
Shiwani, I’m glad you joined in to my belief…
September 29, 2007 at 8:08 am
mysoul,
I completely agree to it. Life is indeed a gift to be added with positivism than to waste it otherwise.
Let’s live good…
October 2, 2007 at 2:08 pm
O, I really like this. So much truth in it. We have one life to live, and it matters not what mistakes we make along the way, only that we live to the fullest with a clean, clear, and pure heart and mind. And that we do no harm to others on our journey. I also like the rhyme scheme, especially these lines, Viral:
“He shall fail
But then will win
He who listens to
His voice within”
It just flows as it goes.. like a river to the sea.. Sea of Just Be.
October 4, 2007 at 4:27 am
Thanks janetleigh. I’m more than glad you liked it and identified the candor in it!
Thanks for your candid appreciation too!
… Peace!
October 4, 2007 at 9:19 am
Well said. Time does not wait for anyone. It is upto you to get up & enjoy its every moment for it isn’t going to be with you after this moment.
October 4, 2007 at 10:43 am
viral
lovely lines. life is like that only. u have give the fact of life.
One day of success
One day of fame
Till then what matters
Is to play the game
i like these lines a lot
u r a good poet. keep on giving the good work.
with lots of luv
October 5, 2007 at 12:46 pm
@ Cuckoo
True! Every single moment vessels one life. Living every moment means living so many lives in one lifetime as a whole!
Innit?
October 5, 2007 at 12:49 pm
Thanks Ritu!
I really like the kind of comments you write, that’s because you always praise ‘em.
hehehe…. lol. Jokes apart, your comments are ever encouraging. Keep commenting dear!
In reciprocation with as much love to you too.
October 6, 2007 at 11:58 am
But still we wish ,if the clock runs behind !!
October 9, 2007 at 2:20 pm
Good work… let me know what is intended by the attribute Solomon, is wisdom?
October 13, 2007 at 8:17 am
well well must admit u r a wonderful poet .i think u write from ur soul SIR.hats off i have become a huge fan of urs .and ofcourse i agree life is like tht .
rashi
October 16, 2007 at 6:18 am
@ arunchullikkal
Thanks and yes, you got that right… Solomon attributes wisdom. Indeed!
October 16, 2007 at 6:27 am
@ rashi
Thanks for the admiration, my friend & I’m much glad to receive your generosity for being my groupie.
That shall definitely buttress my entusiasm to write more zestfully.
Do keep commenting… Thanks again.
… Peace!
October 17, 2007 at 3:56 pm
well pls no thanks and no sorry in freindship if u said freind ok? and i m glad to be a part of ur group .
pls keep on the gud work.ur aina is so soulfull tht it has touched my heart deeply.lovely collection hats off buddy.
Love rashi
October 18, 2007 at 1:11 pm
@ Rashi
yea sure… what you suggested is good to show up being modest by practicing it in a friendship; I mean, not using those two words. But the fact in my opinion is that (i’m unsure whether you’d agree or not) these are not just two words but they contain two very important expressions as a whole which in reality are essential to hold up the relation staying intact… innit? Not asking your friend to use them is being humble and expressing that you’re letting him/her take you for granted and that such mannerisms would be ok to avoid. However, these two words mean the most and are the most useful in expressing feelings; in individuality, sorry is the perfect most word to express it to someone that you realize that you did something improper; likewise, there’s no better word than thanks to express your gratification… Hence, in a nutshell, these two words can be requested to avoid but they’ll always find place in communications when they are best needed because they add the perfect emotion to showcase our mental and emotional frame or set… there isn’t any substitute to these. And, I respect your tender & gentle thought of not needing such words… I wholeheartedly do! But this what I felt like saying in order to explain their importance… It was a very modest attempt from my side. I hope you wouldn’t mind it otherwise… THANKS… lol
Glad to have your compliments on my works, thanks for the noble admiration…
Love.
P.S. “Like, when you render services from some company or buy products for your own good use, you pay them in the form of money i.e. materialisitically. In friendship, you reward a favor/a help with an emotion – THANKS!”
October 24, 2007 at 7:24 am
Hello dear, it seems that the comment above has concluded the meaning of beautiful “sorry” and “thanks”. The way you’ve described the meanings and purpose of using them itself has become an article again. lol. Generally people say sorry and thanks in anticipation of something or they just say it but the explanation you’ve given is in the real sense of using these words. GOD bless!
October 26, 2007 at 3:32 am
@ Rajesh
Thanks Pa!
Love.
October 29, 2007 at 4:29 pm
THANKS for the realisation and SORRY for not being able to visit too often… you know what i m trying to say… i agree with you!!!
October 30, 2007 at 4:36 am
@ Shiwani
Yeah yeah, I’m hearing what your saying. I very well am getting the significance of those capital letters, girl. Bau hoshiyar thai gai chhe?
October 31, 2007 at 5:43 pm
Lol… I was damn serious… but i guess HUMAN PERCEPTION is the root cause of amplifying the ‘non-existent’ problems…!!
November 1, 2007 at 4:34 am
@Shiwani
Now as it is, written words are drawn back to be restricted of facial expressions. Therefore, lacking in letting the emotion of jest or seriousness be clear leaving it upto the reader’s perception. While there’s always a minor chance to be wrongly understood in the said aspect of conversing, I hit upon the minor one. My apologies for the same and hence, a gratified thanks to you on that account of now knowing that “you were damn serious… lol”
Hey!